Q. The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The given line graph illustrates how many people made an enquiry to enquired the Tourist Information Office in a certain city over a six-month period in 2011.
Overall, it is evident that the number of enquires through a who used their telephone and via face to face saw have seen a raising trend during the given period. In contrast, the number of people who made contact by letter or e-mail was the lowest in the same period.
Looking at the line graph more closely, one cans see that a number of enquires who get the information throughout a worker with face to face was the lowest, at approximately 450 on January in 2011. This figure increased abruptly at around 1,900on June in the same year, surpassing the figure which was used by letter or e-mail and by mobile phone, during on February, March, April. Also, the figure of using their telephone fluctuated since January to March, which, however, rose to 1,600 on Jun in 2011. In contrast, the number of enquires who take an information by the Tourist Information Office in one city gradually decreased to approximately 380 on March in 2011, and this figure remained followed the next year. (여기는 항목과 수치를 다시 한번 확인해주세요!)
총평: (6/6/6/6) 6.0
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