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Technological developments has had a huge impact on consumer activities. This essay will discover the changes in counsumer behavior caused by technological advancements and its benefits.
With advancements of technology, the growing number of consumers do online shopping as a major way of shopping. This is because Internet shopping is more convenient and cheaper than traditional ways of shopping in many ways. Consumers need to move to go shopping at shops like supermarkets. In contrast, they can purchase products with few clicks on an online shopping mall while staying at home comfortably. Furthermore, the price of products are often less costly on the Internet because operating an online mall requires much less money than running an actual shop. It enables sellers to sell their products at more reasonable prices to people. In fact, over several years, while the retail industry has kept been reduced, the number of online shopping malls has been significantly increased.
In my opinion, the trend towards online shopping have more advantages that its disadvantages. It is more easy to compare prices between different shops on the Internet since people do not need to move around to check prices. Sometimes, people can even buy on foreign countries shopping mall sites where the price is lower than their own countury. For instance, Korean can get the lastest smart phone at almost two-thirds of price in Korea on Chinese online shopping mall. These benefits of Internet shopping help consumers to make more reasonable choices.
In conclusion, I think that benefits of consumer behavior that are favor of online shopping outweigh its disadvantages in terms of reasonable shopping.
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