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Many students prefer to have a gap year for making a memorable experience by traveling and working. However, I firmly believe that the gap year is just a method to waste of time because they can get the experience on vacation and other students who do not choose to take a gap year can get a better experience later. First of all, Students students can travel around during vacation. Most students say the gap year is important because they are not able to travel for long days when they start starting university. However, they do not spend all of their time for studying. For example, my university friends always made a travel plans after they finished the final exam. Moreover, they can travel enough days and gained a nice experiences during vacation. On top of that, one year is not a short period and it can make a big gap on the students group. At first, the university students may can envy those who took a gap year but they can get better experience after they get a job earlier than the group that experienced a gap year experienced group. This is because, the workers group are wealthier than the students group. To be specific, the workers earn more money than students, so they can host on better accomodations and enjoy better time with expensive cuisine while but students who took a gap year are not able to enjoy it. In summary, the gap year’s benefits are not the best choice before starting the university because the gap year’s benefits are not just their strong points. For these reasons, the gap year is not a good idea before entrance into the university.
270자 40분. 시험 11/27 목표5.5 단어검색: 3회 이번 주제는 그래도 친숙한 주제라 시간이 많이 절약된 듯 합니다. 그러다보니, 오늘 처음으로 두 개 합쳐서 1시간 내로 완료했네요:) 선생님이 주신 미션을 처음으로 성공했습니다! 앞으로도 이어나갈 수 있게 노력하겠습니다!! 그러다보면 5.5도 감지덕지지만, 시험 때 운이 따른다면 저에겐 꿈인 6.0도 노릴 수 있지않을까 상상해봅니다:) 감사합니다!
총평: 네 ㅇㅇ님, 시간 단축에 성공하셨다는 점이 제일 긍정적이네요. 사실 지극히 개인적인 예상으로는, 시험장에서 ㅇㅇ님이 받을 점수는 70%의 확률로 6.0이고, 30%의 확률로 5.5라고 봅니다. 글 자체만 보면 6.0이 85%, 5.5가 15%인 것 같긴 하지만, 실전에서는 보통 연습 때보다 못쓰고, 시간 등 여러 변수도 들어가기 때문이죠. 여하튼 5.5는 충분히 받으실 수 있으니까 지금처럼만 연습해주세요~
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