<Topic> You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. |
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These days, there is mixture of nationalities with globalization worldwide. In addition, there are some arguments that the mix of cultures and nationalities is helpful or not to development. This essay will deliver the opinion that globalization in population is not helpful for a country. First of all, the mixture of nationalities makes big differences between people. Adding more culture differences, people have to consider various thing when make decision. It means there is delay of time to deal with conflict of opinions. To make the country being developed more quickly, laws and policies should be made by coincidence of opinions on time. For example, when we make decision to deal with COVID urgently if there are disagree of agree as nationalities, the government cannot control problems on time. Other people can say that various views make the country develop in many aspects. However, it is inefficient sometimes. For instance, South Korea has developed quickly 60 years ago. At that time, almost of population was consisted with Korean and, the Korean government did not consider the differences of cultures so that the Korea could develop society more quickly after the South-north war. In conclusion, I do not agree with the argument that a country is developed more quickly with globalization of population. With mixture of cultures and nationalities, the government would search more information and opinions whenever they make important decisions. However, the globalization is natural thing as transportation and media are enhanced. Following the changes, the government should find out efficient process of make decisions for whole population in the country. |
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