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질문: Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits.
Discuss both side and give your opinion.
답: Owing to threatened local culture, it is considered by some people that tourism should be banned in some areas while there are others who say that changes and developments are inevitable. In this essay, I would like to examine both views and demonstrate my own opinion.
On the one hand, some people say government
should restrict tour area because tourist and tourism often have a bad impact
on local culture due to their careless attitude. In other words, they
tend to think local regions as theme park and only care about their experience
and memories without respect. Due to this tendency, a local society in
many countries suffer from environmental problems and damage of their unique
culture.
On the other hand, there are other people who say every local society should embrace the changes and readjust to
them because developments are inevitable especially in these fast-changing
days. Therefore, at this point of view, restricting tourism are
meaningless measure wasting time and delaying developments.
Lastly, in my opinion, I believe banning
the area is not the best solution to this issue because some people in these
regions are make a living by tourism products. Instead of banning the area, government
should control the number of tourists in the area and apply more strict rules
and fines for careless behavior.