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<Topic> The
bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest
of the world for the year 2014. Scotland’s
Export to the Rest of the UK and the Rest of the World – 2014. |
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The supplied
bar chart illustrates the comparison of Scotland’s export revenues between the
rest of the United Kingdom and the rest of the world in 2014. On the whole,
the majority of industries make more profit from the rest of the world than
that of the UK with an exception, which is electrical & instrument
engineering. Significantly, When it comes
to the export profit from the rest of the world, business service & finance,
hotels & restaurant services earned 13.8 billion pounds as the highest revenue
and it is followed by that of chemicals & mineral products, sold by a worth
of 9.5 billion sterling. The third-highest column is wholesale & retail, 1.3
billion pounds less than that of chemicals & mineral products. The export
revenue of manufacturing of food & drink and other manufacturing show
mere 100 million difference with each other, 5.8 and 5.9 billion pounds respectively. Of export
profits to the rest of the United Kingdom, chemicals & mineral products plot
the highest profits, 5 billion pounds, which is nearly one-third of that of international
the highest export and it is closely trailed by that of manufacturing of food
& drink, 4.4 billion pounds. It is noteworthy that electrical & instrument
engineering was the only industry in which export to the UK exceeded that of global export revenue,
with 4 billion sterling. |
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