[Topic] You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. |
[Answer] These days, The main advantage of the tour for natural environment is that many students studying science can conduct research in person. Usually the natural areas have been protected so that many university students and researchers relied on papers. However, now they can visit there and experience the real thing by touching, smelling, listening. It would be an effective way to research on ancient environmental history of the Earth. For instance, if the scientists study about the history of South Pole, they would need some samples of snow. In this case, they can visit the area and pick samples up for their researches without any barriers. On the other hand, there are critical
drawbacks as well In conclusion, there are pros and cons to the development that scientists and tourists can visit remote areas (이런 식으로 정확히 작성할 수 있어야 합니다.) |
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