You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing because I saw an advertisement in a magazine, and I thought to saw an advertisement in
magazine, that is because I thought that I am a suitable person whom you wanted.
I was completed a master’s degree in
education, and I became a director of a primary education school’s Director. I have 30 years experience
teaching children. I like to not only encourage children develop a positive
self-image but also help to find their potential capability. I am dedicated and
enthusiastic.
Now
I am retired, and taking being take a rest. On the one hand, but I would still like to earn
money while doing something that I like. Besides, I want to help working parents
because I know that is very hard work to take care of their child.
I use to read books or cook during my free
time. I believe that your child and I would become to being a best friends. We will spend the whole day to do something to spark the imagination such as drawing, reading and
so on. Of course, we will be with the super delicious cookies that what I made.
I hope to hear from you soon, and that I
will be able to help.
Your Sincerely
Euna
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