In the
future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people
in many countries. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Many experts predict that in the future, our society will become an aging
society worldwide. There are several reasons why this phenomenon happens and I believe
that this trend will be a disadvantage on our community.
To begin with, there are some reasons why many people say that the
proportion of elderly generation will exceed the number of youth generation. First
and foremost, many countries all over the world have a low birthrate and even
predict it to be lower in the future. One of the reasons is that these days, people
tend to want an only child or not at all due to various social problems such as
expensive education cost, high-priced apartment, work-life balance issue, and
so on. Another reason is that as development technologies, people’s lifespan is
increased. Therefore, people do not easily die unless serious virus that modern
medical method cannot remedy. Thus, the aging times will get worse and worse as
the birthrate is lower but elderly people keep growing.
If this trend continues in the future, I firmly believe that this
phenomenon will be the worst situation in our community. Firstly, people will
suffer from a decrease in the number of workers; this will be make many countries’
economy get collapse. In addition, the burden of elderly support per person is
increased. Thus, young generation have difficult with their life and always be pressured
about the support cost.
In conclusion, the low birthrate and development of medical
technology effect on an increase in the aging and I strongly believe that this
trend make people struggling with various negative impacts
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