Some people say that e-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some extent that conventional newspaper and magazines will be substituted by the newest technology and online materials because it is easier and convenient for readers. However, I disagree with this statement because there are a majority of individuals still prefer to read news formed by paper-published especially for children and the elderly.
To begin with, it is common to see that many children have storytime with their parents at home. Even though there are a variety of children's books and educational materials on the Internet, it is important to have family time by reading a book to children. The most beneficial factor of reading actual books for children is that they can easily envision the story of the book and develop creativity by listening from their closet relationship. Not only it is good for their imagination or development but also it could bring them to build a strong family relationship.
Moreover, paper books and the media based on paper are essential for the old generation. They possibly adapt to new technology and the Internet by learning and gaining computer skills, however, it is certainly not easy for them to delve into the new world since they would feel so much stress and that could affect their physical as well as mental health. When they need to find vital information, the newspaper and magazines at the stores could help them in a better and faster way.
In conclusion, although e-books would be one of the appealing ways of providing news for the public, I believe that paper-based media are still necessary for a certain generation particularly young children and the old generation.
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