Some people believe that teenagers should be
required to do unpaid community work in their free time, this can benefit
teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree with this
statement?
Recently, the issue of unpaid community work to teenagers has
become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that these need to work
unpaid volunteer in their free time, while others argue otherwise. And I agree that
latter stand. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a
conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, some peoples believe that working such
as unpaid can grow student’s sociality. It is wrong thinking to young peoples
to do imposing. First, students have to do something in their free time, such
as sports, hobbies, and etc. A person who entrances volunteered themselves were
very satisfied with those who did not. Second, it shows that young people are a shortage of labour technics than adults. So it can lead to accidents.
On the one hand, first, by having teenagers to be
involved with the community work, they have made a setting that requires mature
responsibilities. For examples, there are doing respecting adults.
additionally, it is also undeniable that the community lacks labour. To solve this situation, we need to solve these situations, we should pay for labour and
give benefits such as score to need to university entrance.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a
variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in
a careful manner, the choice of whether helping the local or not belongs to
teenagers, I fully support the view that we should not require them to do works
which are others' responsibility.
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