안녕하세요!
이번에는 짧은 글 두가지 올려봅니다.
그리고 혹시 여기 ielts첨삭 올리는 곳인데 이런 글 올려도 괜찮은지 궁금해요!
네 다은님, 괜찮습니다! 대신 올리실 때 이 글이 어떠한 문맥에서/상황에서 쓰이는지 등 정보를 조금 알려주시면, 제가 더 정확하게 봐드릴 수 있어요 :)
항상 감사합니다!!! :)
1.
Each of the four photo collages has its own theme, and they are is combined using architectural elements with additional white texture.
In the first picture, the light seen directly or indirectly is felt. There are light through the skylight, the shape of the light coming down, the light reflected on the water, and the light reflected off the ceiling. In addition, I tried to emphasize the smooth curved staircase through a twisted knot that gives a decorative feel to the element of the staircase.
The second picture overlaps the structure and nature. People are also considered an element of nature, and they were (여기랑) placed between structures, and stones and plants are (여기 중 뭐든 상관은 없지만, 여튼 시제는 둘 중 하나 혹은 현재완료로 수정해주세요!) also inserted. The lace that started from the elevator and revealed between the structures is to be expressed by adding a layer of thin texture with a hole in it.
The third picture tried to show time and the shape of mass through a traditional Korean palace. The horizontal structure of the past and the horizontally stretched rounded twine are repeated. On the contrary, modern vertical structures are contrasted to show the passage of time. On the path that people pass by, time is once again shown through the appearance of nature that has naturally changed over time.
The last picture is the view from the window when I lived in Paris. I could feel different temperatures in each house through the windows and doors that appeared repeatedly. It is intended to be expressed through seaweeds which have an uneven texture and stretch out from place to place.
2.
Based on precious study, <positive spaces>, this project tried to test the potential (뭐의 포텐션을 측정해야하는지를 적어주셔야 할 것 같은데, 제가 상황에 대한 정보가 없어서 확답을 드리기는 조금 어렵네요ㅠㅠ). This work began to be outlined with two sofas by turning the top and bottom of the existing silhouette.
When two people sit on this sofa, they look away from each other. At the same time, an environment is naturally formed that gives a sense of distance in which they can talk together at any time while having a personal direction. This sofa provides a sense of distance where two people of different personalities can coexist and be happy when using this sofa.
The first sofa has a round and fluffy shape, with threads spewing out between them. The second sofa has a straight and bold shape, while the columns extending upward show a rough texture.
Both sofas were made by twisting the same material, threads, and natural colors such as green or neutral colors are used. This expresses the time and space where two different people coexist. On the other hand, neon and red colors have opposite characteristics. Although the neon that are often seen on a linear type of sofa shows the desire to fusion. (여기는 비문인데, 댓글 한번 주세요!) It can be seen by looking at the neon color rising to the edge from the center where various colors are mixed. The red color shows the desire to maintain a certain distance from each other. On the round sofa, there is a circled fence which is repeated in red. This color is like a signal to stop coming closer to the other person when it gets closer than a certain distance.
총평: 이번 것도 크게 문제는 없었고, 제가 표시해드린 자잘한 사항들만 조금 봐주시면 될 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)