The given pie
charts provide information on the contribution to Turkey’s economy by different industry
sectors for the years 2000 and 2016.
Overall, the top three
sectors – including which are agriculture, healthcare and education, and leisure– constituted
almost three-fifths of the total share in 2000. However, this trend changed in 2016,
with the categories of healthcare and trade accounting accounted for the largest percentage.
For the year
2000, the agriculture sector contributed the largest percentage to the economy,
with 24 percent, followed by the leisure and healthcare industries, which each took up
17 percent respectively. Meanwhile, the two industries that showed the least
contributions were construction and finance, with about 8 percent of the total.
In regard to
2016, each sector showed a similar contribution to Turkey’s economy. While
the percentage of agriculture decreased sharply from 24 percent in 2000 to 14
percent in 2016, that of construction had an increase, reaching 10 percent. It is
noticeable that the healthcare and education sector remained relatively stable in rate, in both years.
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