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There has been the desire people People have the desire to seek for convenience. In
this regard, it is often argued that many people aren’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) healthier and do not do
more activity than in the past. This essay will talk about the reason for this
and suggest a remedy.
Due to the developed technology, there has been conversion
from wire telephone that is commonly utilised at home to portable phone Phone, which
might lead to lethargy. For example, now days nowadays (이거 지난번에도 틀렸는데 주의해주세요!) many people tend to spend their
time on watching YouTube, even shopping on online. Because of this, many
companies might try to jump on bandwagons by incorporating phone application,
such as Uber eats, to earn more income on online as well either. This could contribute
to reducing frequency of cooking food as well as make laziness of people. This
can be perceived one of reasons why people are getting unhealthy and lazy than
in the past.
In order to mitigate this phenomenon, there should be not
only people’ willingness to reduce the amount of the time on the phone but also
right parenting education. For example, it is highly likely that parents allow
their children to be on the phone as a way to distract them in a public space;
parents think that is also the method to stop their children from crying. Due
to this, the future of their future of children could be influenced by the familiarity with
technology. In this way, parent’s education might be able to alleviate this by
paying attention them in person rather than with technology.
In conclusion, although there might be various reasons and
solutions, I strongly argue that the problem of people being unhealthy and
unactive can be solved with parent’s education.
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