■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. |
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| Technology has developed for a long time also it has numerous advantages. Also, it has changed the life of the people in the world. Some people argue that earlier technology is more beneficial than the recent technology. I strongly disagree with the opinion mentioned above. This essay will discuss why the recent technological enhancement has more benefits and changed the people’s lifeless than before. |
| To begin with, the speed of enhancing and creating new technology is getting faster thus the society feels that there is more change than before. To be specific, producing things without any base will take much more time than upgrading things. The scientists and technicians can experiment further and invent a new type of machine based on the technology that was created in the past, instead of producing new technology. For example, It took Apple about 10 years to create iPhone first generation. However, producing iPhone third generation took only about 2 years |
| Secondly, earlier technological development is less beneficial to the society, since the advent of the early technology made a big problem such as unemployment and lots of people got fired in the period. Specifically, nowadays, many ways to work together with technology were explored. However, people did not know how to deal with the situation in which the people and technology had to work together in the past. As a result, several companies needed to fire the employees to reduce the expenditure of the company. |
| In conclusion, the speed of current technological development and the earlier technological development caused a problem in the past convinced me to agree that earlier technology brought more benefits and changes to the people. |
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: /9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | /9 | /9 | /9 | /9 |
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Technology has developed for a long time, and it also also it has numerous advantages. Also, it has changed the life of the people in the world. Some people argue that earlier technology is more beneficial than the recent technology. However, I strongly disagree with the opinion mentioned above. This essay will discuss why the recent technological enhancement has more benefits and changed the people’s lifeless than before.
To begin with, the speed of enhancing and creating new technology is getting faster, and thus the society feels that there is more change than before. To be specific, producing things without any base will take much more time than upgrading things. The scientists and technicians can experiment further and invent a new type of machine based on the technology that was created in the past, instead of producing new technology. For example, it It took Apple about 10 years to create iPhone first generation. However, producing iPhone third generation took only about 2 years.
Secondly, earlier technological development is less beneficial to the society, since the advent of the early technology made a big problem such as unemployment and lots of people got fired in the period. (and 전후의 부분은 사실상 같은 말입니다.) Specifically, nowadays, many ways to work together with technology were explored. However, people did not know how to deal with the situation in which the people and technology had to work together in the past. As a result, several companies needed to fire the employees to reduce the expenditure of the company.
In conclusion, the speed of current technological development and the fact that earlier technological development caused a problem in the past convinced me to agree that earlier technology brought more benefits and changes to the people. (그 반대입니다. 이렇게 쓰면 참사가 나니까 주의해주세요!)
총평: (6/6/7/6) 6.5
잘 써오시다가 결론에서 저렇게 실수해버리면 큰일날 수 있습니다. 이러한 부분에 있어 조금 주의해주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)