You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays, most young people tend to spend a lot of time in shopping centers and in modern society, some people have a negative opinion about this phenomenon. However, I opine that the merits override the demerits.
To begin with, most young people go shopping and relieve their stress. First of all, if the government regulates young people to do not enjoy their shopping they can not concentrate on improving their academic score or to work efficiently at the workplace. To be specific, it is no exaggeration to say that young people earn money for consumption and if the government regulates their behavior young people lose motivation in studying and working hard in the workplace. Therefore, if the government regulation of young people behavior can occur bad results.
Moreover, especially shopping has a positive effect on students. First and foremost, most students search for their interests coincide when they make first friends and they talk about which products are interesting in this process, they can easily form a positive relationship because they spend a lot of time to get shopping together. As a result, it is not just about making friends easier but also helps them to do better in group life when they get older.
As it has been demonstrated, in modern society people concern about young people spending their time in shopping centers. However, shopping helps young people the reason why they should work hard and they motivated to work harder and young students can easily to make positive relationships with others.
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