Describe a plant or animal that you
think is interesting. Describe some of the threats or challenges if faces and
explain how it overcomes those threats or challenges.
Chameleon is one of the animals an animal that I am
going to describe. They live in the forest with diverse kinds of animals and
also their enemies like snakes and birds. When they encounter their attackers them, they can
change their body color to protect themselves. To be specific, if some leaves
are beside them when they meet some snakes, they change their body color immediately
from brown to green to hide themselves. Changing the body color of chameleon A chameleon changing its body color is its their own special way of overcoming a dangerous situation.
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위와 같은 문제의 경우 첫 문장을 어떻게 써야할까요?
총평: 이번 글 잘 써주셨습니다. 표현상 자잘한 사항들은 있긴 했지만 크게 작용하지는 않을 거고, 논제에서 묻는 바를 깔끔하게 정리해주셨다는 점이 더 긍정적입니다.
첫 문장의 경우 지금처럼 가셔도 되고, 아니면 A chameleon is an animal I find interesting~으로 가셔도 괜찮습니다. 크게 상관은 없어요!
수고하셨습니다 :)