목표 레벨 9 입니다.
You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write an email to the course tutor in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things;
Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue at this time
Say what action you would like to take
Total 199 words
Dear Mr. Lee,
My name is Yuri Kim, and my student ID is 780709. I am currently taking your evening course on literature.
I am sending this email to request to you to help me continue your course.
I have been working full-time for all the weekdays for full-time and taking your course at night as a part-time student. Last week, I was promoted to manager at work and was requested to take some evening shifts as a new manager. Consequently, I am not able to attend your evening course anymore as my new work shifts conflict with the course schedule. However, as you may know, I have been studying very hard in your class and received A on the mid-term exam and each of reports. I do not want to give up these good marks by dropping the course now.
I asked the academic advisor at school for advice about my situation. She told me that I can ask you to transfer me to your online course. Therefore, I hope you understand my strong will to keep both my career and study and transfer me to your online course. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Yuri Kim
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