The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table demonstrates the consumption of five major types of fast food in Melbourne between 2005 and 2025.
Overall, hamburger was consumed the most throughout the chart. Salad experienced by far the greatest change in consumption rate from 2005 to 2025.
In 2005, fast foods that were eaten the most were hamburger and fried chicken, at having 40 units and 35 units respectively, while only 5 units of salad and 6 units for fired rice and noodles were consumed. In the present, despite the fact that the figure for hamburger diminished 2 units, it still had the most consumption units in Melbourne. By contrast, only 8 units of noodles and 9 units of fried rice were eaten.
By 2025, the estimated consumption of salad jumped to 41 units, which was more than four times of the figure in 2005. The estimate for noodles rose by a further 1 unit from what it was in the present, while the estimate for fried rice remained stable.
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햄버거와 관련해서 2005년과 현재 간 수치의 감소가 있으며, 그게 유일한 감소를 보이는 상황입니다. 고로 그 '유일한' 을 확실히 보여주시면 좋아요.
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