The Bar charts describes that poverty percentage by different age groups, comparing men and women. In general, it is clear that women are experiencing poverty more than men in every age groups. There is minimum difference of poverty rate at the age under 5 and maximum difference at the age over 75. Between age under 5 and age 17, there is slight gap between men and women, but in very next period, between age 18 and 24, there is dramatic increasing of gap between the sex. In terms of women poverty rates, decreasing momentum appeared until age 59. During age between 60 and 64, there was around 3 percent of increasing, but the rate went down again afterwards. Men’s poverty rates illustrated to have more fluctuations than women’s poverty rates.
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