millions of people every year move to English - speaking countries
such as Australia, Britain, America, in order to study at school, college
or university.
Why do so many people want to study in English?
Why is English such an important international language?
Nowadays, in the world, many countries have been connected and affected each other.
There are many things to work with other countries or foreigners.
By nationally, we share some information, solve some problems like environment problems and help each other when some countries need aids.
And (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.) English is the official language of the world so whenever people work together they use English to communicate.
People who have tried to find jobs might have faced some difficulties if they don’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) have the English speaking skill.
Speaking English is an essential requirement for getting jobs in many field. As it is mentioned above, the world is connected. Even if people work in a domestic company, the company may cooperate with foreign companies such as trading, logistics, travelling, exhibition, etc...
How should people communicate without English? (지금은 연설문의 대본을 쓰는 게 아닙니다. 의문형은 이유불문 쓸 일이 없다고 보셔도 돼요.)
The importance of the Internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로, 대문자 시작입니다. 다른데에도 다 바꿔주세요!) internet can not be overemphasized and the words of internet are in English. Not only internet terms but also a lot of important information are written in English like medical, science terms. etc. The more we study the more we need English.
However, most of countries’ mother languages are not English. Even though we study at school a lot of students still feel difficult to study English.
There is also limit to study English in their countries where their first language is not English. We feel afraid to talk with foreigners and studying language tends to forget easily when people don’t speak out often.
To study with native speakers is absolutely the best way to improve English. No doubt about this point and language is influenced by its culture.
Experiencing its culture is definitely helpful to learn English.
To sum up, studying and speaking English is necessary to survive in this world.
And to study more efficiently millions of people move to English speaking Speaking countries.
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