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The chart gives information about the
rate of the population aged 65 years and over from 1940 to 2040 in the USA,
Sweden, and Japan. (제가 해드린 것처럼, 문단을 구분할 때에는 엔터키를 두 번 쳐주시면 됩니다.)
Overall, the proportion of the people
who are 65 years over increased during the period given. It was below 10% for
the three countries in 1940, however, it rose to a figure higher than 20% in 2040 for all
countries provided.
It is evident that Japan had gone
through the most dramatic change in terms of the aged population growth. It was
about 5% in 1940, and it rose to over than 25% in 2040. In particular, the rate
skyrocketed from 10% to over 25% just within a decade from 2030 to 2040. (미래의 일의 경우 과거로 쓸 수 없으며 이는 위와 아래 문단의 경우도 마찬가지입니다.)
The USA and Sweden show a steady growth
of their aged population rate for the given period. It was below 10% for both
countries in 1940 with a slightly higher figure in the USA. In 2000, Sweden
overtook that of the USA at the rate of 15%. In 2040, Japan has the highest top rate of
the population aged 65 and higher, followed by Sweden and the USA, over 25%,
25%, and lower than 25%, respectively.
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