■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼
The system used for rubbish/garbage
collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems
for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In
your letter.
-describe how the rubbish collection system
is not working properly
-explain how this is affecting you and your
neighbours
-suggest what should be done about the
problem |
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Your Answer ▼
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hello, my name is Doo-San Lim. I have been living in Sejong city for 30 years. These days, I smell bad (이렇게 쓰시면 큰일납니다. 이렇게 쓰실 경우 임두산씨가 냄새난다는 의미가 돼요.) whenever I commute to my work.
In front of my apartment, there has been a big pile of rubbish since last week.
As the rubbish collection company got bankrupt last month, the condition of my
town is getting dirty.
All my neighbors are very worried about
this situation. Especially, the waste from the kitchen makes them be difficult
to breath. Cats and dogs from the wild are hovering near the getting to garbage. They might spread
other diseases.
I think the rubbish collection company’s
bankruptcy was from the price of garbage. Because the price of garbage increased got up,
the company was not able to earn money by recycle it and sell to China. A lot
of manufacturing companies company use new plastic materials rather than buy recycled ones,
considering the price.
So I firmly believe that council has to
approve the budget to help the rubbish collection company. The company did not
only its business but also cleaned cleaning the rubbish. That was related to our
qualities of life. So I argue that a quick decision of the congress should be
necessary.
Yours faithfully,
Doo-San Lim. |
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: 6.0/9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | 7/9 | 6/9 | 6/9 | 5/9 |
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Comment ▼ 내일 시험이시네요! 지금 10분 걸린 거면 너무 빨리 쓰셨습니다. 조금 더 천천히 쓰셔도 되니까 문법에서의 오류를 줄이고보다 정확한 표현을 쓰는 연습이 필요해요. 일단 내일 시험 잘 치고 오시고, 아마 다시 치셔야 할 수도 있을 건데, 그때는 문법 쪽에 조금 더 집중해서 공부해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다 :) |
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작성 시간 10분/목표 점수 6.5/시험일자 2월 7일 입니다.