■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼
Some people say that now we can see films
on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that
to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own
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It is common belief that the cinema would
not be necessary in the future some days. The more people enjoys a movie by using their smartphones smart
phones or tablets, the more cinemas suffer the lack of visitors. There are
studies that predict almost of cinemas around us will diminished in 10 years.
The company which give video service through
applications on the Internet internet promotes a cheap and convenient program. People can
watch unlimited movies after paying only 5 dollars in a month. They can watch
movies in every places such as buses and subways. If they invest surrounding audio
systems and a big monitor in their house, they could enjoy good quality of
movies like in a theater.
But I think this trend will be useless soon.
I insist that watching movie is not just seeing a video but sharing experience
with others. People can learn other cultures through movies. Learning can be
more effective when they like it with others. In my case, I visit a theater with
my friends once a month. After finishing the movie, we talk about movie in the
café which is located near the theater. That conversation can’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다. 저 밑에도 마찬가지이고요.) come to us
using smart phones.
Especially, I reckon that the cinema is
more important for children to raise their knowledge. They can understand
social issues with watching movies. But (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 않습니다.)if they can’t go the cinema, the
efficiency of learning would be declined. Parents and friends should be with
you (2인칭은 구어에 해당하므로, 따로 쓰실 일이 없다고 생각하셔도 무방합니다.) when they watch the movie. Those behaviors could encourage children to know
the story and the music related to our real lives.
In summary, I argue that the cinema will
survive even though the culture of watching the movie has been changed.
Developing technology can’t stop the experience of direct exchanging culture. |
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: 6.0/9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | 7/9 | 6/9 | 5/9 | 6/9 |
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Comment ▼ 내일 시험 잘 치고 오시고, 시험장에서는 급하게 쓰지 마시고 1,2 각각 20분 40분에 맞춰쓰세요! 시간이 남으시면 검토라도 해주셔야 합니다. 지금보다 조금 더 잘 쓰셔야 6.5가 가능해요.
논제에서 discuss both라고 하는 경우 서론-입장1-입장2-결론(+필요시 내 입장)의 4문단을 갖춰주시면 됩니다.
수고하셨습니다 :) |
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글자수 288/걸린 시간 20분/목표 점수 6.5/다음 시험 일 2월 7일