<Topic> You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. | |||
Some people insist that only a talented
person can survive in specific fields like art and sport. Other people argue
that any people can succeed (이거 정말 많은 한국 수험생들이 틀리는 사항이므로 이번 기회에 반드시 정리놓으세요!) In a talent-oriented point of view, the natural talent is very important in art and sport. The natural sense of art and body structure is crucial for real. For instance, when children start ballet, the shape of toes and overall body shape is important. Even if they do their best, ballet is a hard field without basic condition of body. Without this physical condition, (이거는 Talent...라고 보기에는 조금 무리가 있습니다. 아예 틀린 것도 아니지만요.)the children get exhausted soon and sometimes practicing motion would be hurts. However, there are winners who overcome
the natural condition like In conclusion, natural talent is more important than practicing to be an athlete or artist. The given condition (이 컨디션의 경우도 사실 natural talent라고 보기에는 무리가 있고요.) from parents is necessary in these fields because it is hard to overcome the physical condition with practicing. The sports and arts are selective part that is not achieved by anybody. | |||
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총평: 아예 오프토픽까지는 절대 아닌데, 그렇다고 논제와 완전히 일치한다고 보기에도 조금 무리가 있는 상황입니다. 타고난 신체조건보다는, 베토벤 등의 음악적 재능에 관해서 다뤄주시는 게 좋을 것 같습니다. 혹은 스포츠로 치면 모 축구 선수의 점프력 등을 예로 드시는 것도 괜찮고요.
수고하셨습니다 :)