■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading

▶ Topic :

▶ Your Answer :

The bar graphs show the leisure time in a typical week in hours by sex and employment status between 1998~99.

Overall, an unemployed and retired rate for both males and females reached the highest and second highest point, respectively. By contrast, employed in full time rate indicates the lowest point for males and females at the same time.

In the case of female, unemployed and retired rate peaked at the same highest point which is about seventy eight hours. Following this rate is the employed rate in full time which indicated the lowest point at about thirty eight hours. Other two rates, employed in part time and housewives, reached about forty and fifty hours, respectively.

In the case of males, unemployed and retired rate reached the almost the same level, which are about eighty five and eighty four hours, respectively. By contrast employed rate in full time indicated the lowest point at thirty eight hours.

Score: 7

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