With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information much faster.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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In modern society, many expert said that students can learn more information faster with the development of science and technology. In my opinion, I agree with the idea that advanced technology allows young people to learn more information faster.
On the one hand, with the help of the science and technology of the Internet, many students have access to information on various topics quickly and easily. Search engines on the Internet make a lot of information available. For example, when I researched my thesis on the Internet when I was a college student, I got good grades. Study and quote various papers, save a lot of time and get a lot of information based on them.
In addition, mobile and wireless network technology, one of the science technologies, has made it possible to discuss with other students regardless of time and place. When students became curious, they could easily find answers by sharing opinions and asking questions with their friends or teachers. According to a survey conducted by the Ministry of Education in Korea, more than 90 percent of students answered that they solve their questions by discussing and asking each other's opinions through mobile phones, Internet chatting, or phone calls without going to the library to get information when they have questions. This can be explained that most students in Korea are greatly helped by technology.
In conclusion, with the help of IT technology among science technology, it is my view that most students today can learn more information easily and quickly.
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