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<Topic> The
pictures below show the changes that took place at Laguna Beach from 1950 to
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Given three pictures portray how Laguna Beach had changed from 1950 to 1990. In general, we can evidently see that the
beach had become a great deal more accessible with some added and expanded facilities.
In 1950, a few beach huts were located at the center
of the beach. Sand dunes and woodland were situated on the west side and east
side accordingly. A narrow track on the northeast was connected to the beach
huts alongside the woodland, and it was the only way to access to the beach.
One of the most noticeable changes from 1950
to 1970 was expanded accommodation at the center of the beach. It was revamped
as villas by putting sand dunes towards the north. Hence, the sand dunes area was
shrunk, whereas the narrow track was refurbished as a paved two lanes road.
Another significant change was a caravan park after removing all woods on the former
woodland.
In 1990, although sand dunes disappeared, the
area has transformed into Landscaped Gardens. On the right side of the gardens,
villas which were at the center of the beach had replaced by a new large hotel,
accommodating a much greater number of visitors. In the meantime, while the two
lanes road still secured the same place for twenty years, a caravan park has
been substituted by a car park. On the far side, a new pool area has been added
abutted a new hotel. Last but not least, a surf school newly has introduced on
the south part of the beach and nearby the sea.
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