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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the average emission of carbon dioxide per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.
The most noticeable feature was that in the United Kindom, people produced the highest amount of carbon dioxide during the period. From 1967 to 1977, while the United Kindom remained relatively the same, other countries climbed up significantly. (여기의 경우 주어를 정확하게 갖춰주셔야 합니다. 증가하는 것은 해당 국가가 아니라 해당 국가의 수치입니다.) After 1977, although its' emissions in Italy and Portugal increased steadily, Sweden's emissions dropped significantly from more than 10 metric tones in 1977 to about 7 metric tones in 1987.
It is also interesting that Italy and Portugal went up during all the researched period, however United Kindom and Sweden decreased in carbon dioxide productions. In 2007, Sweden and Portugal have had the same amount of carbon dioxide emissions at about 5.5 metric tones. The features of Sweden's emission showed notable fluctuations over the period from more than 10 metric tones to around 5.5 metric tones.
In conclusion, as can be seen from the chart, although there were some fluctuations bewteen 1967 and 2007. Italy and Portugal showed the increased patterns, while the United Kingdom and Sweden presented the downfall trends. (Task 1은 결론을 내기 위해 존재하는 글이 아닙니다. 이를 대신해서 Overview라는 것을 넣어주시면 되는데, 이때의 overview는 서론 밑으로 갑니다. 다른 학생들이 어떻게 작성했는지 확인해보시면 대략 감을 잡을 수 있을 거에요.)
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