Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Many people have been experienced and encountered a bad situation for life. Some people tend to accept the situation while others are but some people are behaving the opposite. However, I personally think that it is much more beneficial to attempt and advance such matters.
It is a common idea that absorbing the bad situation is the ultimate solution to solve the problem because there are people who cannot able to change the situation immediately that has been given to them at the present. For example, daily labourers, who work and are paid day by day, they might desire to transfer the job but it would take enormous time to accomplish this. Meanwhile, they should keep earning money to pay bills and to buy daily necessaries even though they are unhappy with the job.
On the other hand, there are people who are willing to face a substandard situation. These people are keen to gain a better solution from a bad position, while it requires undergoing hardship. In addition, there will be no improvement if people keep avoiding the problematic situation. For further development, they have it has to endure a hard moment. For instance, if a child had an experience of overcoming problems, the child will be going to the same process that had been done before. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.)
In conclusion, I firmly agree with the statement that it is more advantageous to make an effort to improve the situation no matter how severe it is.
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