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Some people have argued that there is no necessary to spend time protecting wild animals as we do not need them anymore. I completely disagree with this point of view. To begin with, there must be wild creatures in the world. I do not understand why some people believe that protecting wildlife animals is a waste of resources. No matter what the causes, (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 앞뒤의 문맥을 포함해서 댓글로 알려주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) they help people keep living peacefully. As long as they stay with us, we can maintain our lives, as humans should coexist coexistence with wild animals. If they did not exist on the earth (얘는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.), it would lead to a severe natural imbalance, and then it could also result in having various kinds of serious impacts on people like global warming and reduction in the number of people. Thus, we need to gather our abilities into one place so that people can protect wildlife creatures. There is nothing we have a We do not have a right to invade their inhabitants like the rainforest or Atlantic ocean. We are not able to possess the nature all on this planet or even other objects in space. I strongly suggest that people have to realize that no one can own it. Nature exists only for its. (여기도 댓글 주세요!) Therefore, we should put a lot of time to take care of them. In other words, people should make sure that there is no reason to allow and encourage people to exploit and destroy nature, such as reducing meat consumption as well as indiscriminate experiments on animals. If you have in mind to live with them together, just protect all their lives. (얘도 댓글 주시는데, 참고로 2인칭은 구어에 해당하기 때문에 따로 쓸 일이 없다고 생각하셔도 됩니다.) In conclusion, although there will not be as easy as we thought to shelter wild creatures, our efforts will be totally worth it for making the earth peacefully.
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