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(지금처럼 거의 간격 없는 들여쓰기로 문단 구분하면 위험합니다. 그냥 들여쓰기 없이 엔터를 두 번 치는 식으로 구분해주세요!) There is controversy over the issue of whether creating self-driving
systems for vehicles would have more advantages than disadvantages. Although
there are some disadvantages, I believe that there are more advantages of
automobile manufacturers releasing cars with self-driving systems.
When
evaluating the perspective of the people who say that there are more
disadvantages (벌써 너무 많이 쓰이고 있습니다.)of releasing cars with self-driving systems, it is possible to
suggest that they think this way due to the possibility of program errors. When
self-driving systems have technical errors, it could cause serious accidents.
For instance, when the system wrongly recognized the path, the car may not
drive on the proper road. This could cause serious accidents and may hurt
people who are in the car.
Nevertheless, when automobile manufacturers
create self-driving system for vehicles, there are advantages as it would help
people who have difficulty in driving. Self-driving systems for vehicles might
help someone who has difficulty in driving because of the physical reasons.
Take an example of a person who is unable to drive because the person has
difficulty moving arms. For that person, a self-driving system which could change
the direction by moving handle automatically would be very useful.
In
conclusion, releasing cars with self-driving systems is a contentious topic
because there are advantages and disadvantages of that. While while (지워진 부분 대신 단점에 대한 요약도 해주세요!) it is true that there
are some disadvantages of vehicle self-driving systems, it is undeniable that
there are many advantages of creating cars with those systems as it could help
people who have difficulties when driving. |