▶ Your Answer : The pie graphs below give us an information on the types of water usage in six different areas of the world which are North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. These six areas can be designated to two groups, that are industrial usage dominant and agricultural usage donminat areas.
First of all, north america and Europe are the regions that most of its water resources are used for industries. To be specific, north america used 48% of its water to industry while agricultural use and domestic use are took up only 39% and 13% respectively. Europe also invested 53% of its water on industry while the other two uses are only held 47% in total.
In terms of the regions of the second group that are agricultural usage dominant areas, agricultural use holds at least 70% of total water consumption in all regions. Especially, in central asia, 88% of its water is flowing to farms for harvesting while domestic and industrial use figures are only 7% and 5% respectively. The other agricultural usage dominant areas are also shows the huge amount of water consumption on agriculture with 84% in africa , 81% in south east asia, and 71% in south america in sequence.
In conclusion, we can observe that the regions that are holding developed centuries are tend to use its water resources on industry compared to the other regions.
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