Shortage of Housing has given several social consequences. Only the government who can solve the problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a disagreement concerning the
issue of whether or not only the government can solve the problem with a lack
of accommodation which causes various social results. Some people insist that
the authority is only able to tackle the problem whereas others state that
other economical subjects like households and companies can handle this issue
more efficiently. I personally agree with the latter and will suggest my own
opinion in regard to the issue.
Firstly, it is well known that the
government cannot only soley solve various social problems regarding demand and
supply system. For example, once upon a time, people believed that communism
can tackle the irony of capitalism and control markets well, so many people
supported the ideology of communism and gave the government power to manage the
market. However, the expectation of people had been broken and the government
utterly failed because the economic system became deteriorated. When there is
only one economic subject that sovereign the market, supply and demand system
cannot operate well. Therefore, it has proved that only the government is not
able to solve the issue of the housing shortage.
Secondly, I believe that the market system
had better solve the lack of houses because people and companies have more
economic motivation than the government. Most people and corporations want to
gain a lot of profits, so they tend to make many products. This economic
activity can boost supply in the market, so the shortage of products would be
resolved. Likewise, the issue of accommodation would be handled easily, (여기 쉼표의 경우 있으면 오히려 글을 읽어나가는 흐름에 방해가 되므로 지웠습니다.) if
people and companies as well as the government involved in the market.
In conclusion, I insist that the government
cannot solve the shortage of housing efficiently because it was proved through
history. In this regard Thus, I believe that when people and corporations as well as the
authority participate in the issue, the lack of accommodation would be solved.
This is because people and corporations have more motivation to supply houses
in the market than the government.
총평: (8/7/8/7) 7.5
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