The chart describes how many percent of people in Malaysia and Singapore were qualified about science.
Overall, half of the whole sector was that in two of the four sectors, the rate of Malaysians were higher than Singaporeans. Then, the proportion of Singaporean was higher in one sector, while the remaining sector showed a similar number a part and the rest of the sector's rate was similar.
First of all, almost 65% of Malaysians did not have any qualifications in science, and about 35% of them took some tests after school graduation. On the contrary, both sectors' ranges of Singaporeans were a little bit lower than Malaysians, which were respectively about 60% and 30%.
In addition, the bachelor's degree had a gap that was almost two-fold and in this case, the proportion of Singaporeans was higher than Malaysian's. Approximately 20% of Singaporeans held hold a bachelor's degree and the bachelor's degree holders from Malaysia was about 10%. Then, the people who belonged to the 2 countries recorded merely under five percent each.
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