People are living longer than they used to.
Why do you think is happening?
is this a positive or negative trend?
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The rapid increase in life expectancy today is regarded as the greatest achievement of society. This can be attributed to many factors, including improvements in public health, nutrition and health care. And this may be an undesirable trend or a desirable trend.
Meanwhile, many countries are facing an increase in the elderly population. The main drawback of the elderly population is the increase in pension and medical expenses. The increase in the proportion of the elderly in the population asks the question of how best to provide funds to the elderly after retirement. As one question, an increase in the number of senior citizens means that more pensions should be paid, which in turn results in increased costs for the government and tax increases for taxpayers. In addition, the elderly are exposed to numerous infectious diseases, and the increase in the number of elderly people who are sick may put pressure on medical facilities and the supply of facilities may not keep up with demand.
Meanwhile, an increase in the number of elderly people in the population brings about an increase in the number of volunteers in terms of economy. This was confirmed as an overall advantage when the elderly provided free labor for community and government projects after retirement. Also, the elderly have more experience than the young because they have lived for a long time. In this case, the elderly are very helpful in protecting the nation's morals and values according to their own experience. Older people are essential to teach good traditions and lifestyles in longevity because they know better about the culture and lifestyle of the group than young people.
In conclusion, people today live longer with advances in medicine and technology. However, while there are advantages of the elderly population, the disadvantages cannot be ignored.
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요번엔 소요시간을 측정못했어요.. 아마 50분 정도 된거같아요... 문장이 생각이 안나더라구요..
그리고 요번에 긍정과 부정을 하나만 고르지 않고 두개를 한문단씩 나눠서 써봤습니다.
항상 첨삭 감사합니다!