Q. Some people believe that purchasing imported agricultural products has a positive effect. Others think consuming domestic products is better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
(Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge experience)
A. It is a common belief that buying imported agricultural products is more advantageous than eating consuming domestic products. However, there is a more persuasive argument that choosing a domestic agricultural product is more beneficial for both consumers and farmers.
On the one hand, it could cost less money for consumers to import products from other countries. That's because it can make up for some kinds of groceries that are in short in their own country. In fact, it could lower the price and provide more options for consumers to choose from.
Nevertheless, it is more important to buy agricultural food from domestic farmers rather than from overseas since domestic products are a lot more fresh and healthier. To be specific, if one person orders the products grown in the country, it takes less procedure from the local farmers to the buyer which keeps the food fresh compared to those imported products. One research revealed that imported groceries are kept in the fridge for even more time than domestic farm products and it reduces their nutritious benefit. To sum up, while it is apparent that importing agricultural goods from overseas gives more options for consumers to choose, it is undeniable that domestic products are more beneficial for consumer's fresh fridge and their health in the long term.
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