Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you aggree or disagree?
By balancing control to gender and accepting candidates on all degree courses in universities, it is thoroughly unpractical. (지금 서론이 너무 짧은 상황이므로, 앞으로 이 글이 어떻게 전개될 것인지에 대한 간단한 예고라도 해서 글을 보완해주세요!)
In reality, it is true that some specific majors are more popular with one gender than the other because of the character of theory or the social perception. For example, there is a large number of females in on nursing courses and it is pretty hard to control the student's gender equally. If a university prefers to balance control the gender on all courses, it would need enough applicants of each gender. However, we cannot deny that each gender has a different typical tendency and this is a reason that it is hard to fill courses with equal number of males and females.
Apart from the practical reasons mentioned above, I also believe that there are standards of the admission requirement depending depends on majors because universities assess the candidate's academic qualification before approving an acceptance letter. If it is required the gender matter about entrance qualification, it would be unfair. Universities should continue to select the best students for each course and provide the qualified education for student's better life in future. It could be different academic achievement each student but, it would not be related in gender an depends on individual academic ability. (여기는 문장이 살짝 꼬인 것 같은데, 의도하신 바에 대해 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) If universities have a data that the female student's grade was higher than the male student previously, it would be wrong to reject men candidates in favor of women candidates with lower grades or fewer qualifications. This is because Because there are more reasons like the total number of students, aptitute for a major and satisfaction of school life etc., to make the date expressed by gender.
In summary, universities should select the candidates based on individual ability and it does not make sense to change to an admin procedure by gender. The reason is that it is impractical and unfair for all candidates.
총평: (8/8/8/7) 8.0
이정도면 task1에서 발목을 잡히는 것까지 고려해도 7.5는 충분히 받으실 겁니다. 자잘한 부분들만 조금 봐주시면 크게 걱정 없을 거에요.
수고하셨습니다 :)