This table represents proportion of money spent on various sectors in Germany, Italy and the United Kingdom in 2009.
Overall, one can see that all three nations
spent the least on environmental protection sector and the figure was 0.7%, 0.9% and 1.0% for Germany, Italy, and UK each (Overview에서는 구체적인 수치가 따로 들어가지 않습니다. 구체적인 수치는 세부적인 분석을 할 때 넣어주세요!). On the other hand, Germany and the UK
invested tㅗㄷ most for health sector, whereas Italy spent the largest amount of its money on
public services
Looking at the graph more closely, as for public services and economic affairs part, Italy spent most by 8.6% and 4.5% of its budget. However, as long as environmental protection, health, and education part concerned, the UK used the largest percentage of its fund. Particularly, as for the health sector, it spent 7.8 % of its budget, while it used 1.0% and 6.4% for environmental protection and education for each. What is surprising is that the gap between the proportions of money of 3 countries used for public services sector was around 2%, even though the gap for other parts were below 1%. (여기와 관련해서, 지금은 수학시간이 아니기 때문에 굳이 뺄셈을 할 필요가 없습니다. 그러나 나는 꼭 뺄셈을 해야겠다 싶으면 퍼센트포인트를 이용해주셔야 하는데, 이에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드릴게요.)
총평: (6/7/7/7/) 7.0
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