Chart A represents the propositions of films from different countries screened in the UK and Australia in 2001. Chart B describes the number of admissions in the same countries from 1976 to 2006.
Overall, according to Chart A, it is evident that American films were played a lot more than others in both Australian and UK cinemas. With regards to Chart B, the number of cinema admissions in both the UK and Australia in 2005 increased considerably from that the number in 1975.
In detail, Chart A shows that in 2001, US films screened in Australia and the UK represented approximately 67% and 76% respectively. The second popular films in the United Kingdom were domestic, which took up more than one-fifth of the total. However, UK films in Australia was only about 6% in the same year. Regarding Australian films, it is interesting that the percentage of them was bigger in the UK than in Australia. It was close to 10% in the UK while it was only around 3% in Australia. However Meanwhile, films from other countries accounted for more than 15% in Australia and less than 5% in the UK.
According to Chart B, the number of cinema admissions started at around 100 million in the UK and 30 million in Australia in 1976. The figures in both countries fluctuated from 1976 to 2006, but they saw an overall inclining trend apart from a dramatic decrease between 1980 and 1985 in the UK. Both in the UK and Australia, the numbers of cinema admissions reached the highest between 2000 and 2005, which was approximately 180 million in the UK and 90 million in Australia. (제일 중요한, 둘 중 뭐가 더 높았는지를 적어주셔야 합니다.)
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