International animal rights groups argue it is wrong to use and kill animals for the benefit of human beings. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In current society, a wave of animal-protectionism has been increasingly spread to all over the world. There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether it is rational to use and kill animals for the needs of individuals and corporations in human society or not. In my view, not only abusing animals by human beings should be restricted as it is unethical, but also people ought to find substitutes for animals rather than slaughter them.
For the purpose of an individual’s prosperity, slaughtering animals is unethical and vile. This is mainly due to the fact that animals also can feel pain, loneliness, and fear. As human beings have has been raised to have morality and altruistic mindset since childhood, taking living creatures’ lives, only because they are of not categorized as humans, cannot be the moral justification, and rather it sounds hypocritical. With a human-centered thought that human beings are high up on the food chain, I wonder it is possible to dismiss killing animals as part of a phenomenon in the ecosystem to justify the bloody massacre of animals. This double standard, which rationalizes animal maltreatments, is hitting below the belt to hide human’s recognition of our immoral behaviour.
Despite our concerns over inconvenience coming from the absence of purposely killed animal, human beings have been finding the vast number of substitutes that we can utilize in various areas to live in animal killing free society. There already have been plenty of cosmetics companies where have implemented a scheme of manufacturing animal-testing-free products, for instance, and also the number of vegetarians, pescatarians, and vegans who consume mock meat, so-called plant proteins, to avoid butchering is burgeoning throughout the world, which shows endeavour for peaceful coexistence with animals.
In light of the aforementioned factors, as I strongly agree with the main idea, we should thoroughly dwell on the legitimation for murdering animals and try to find the way of co-existing with animals to protect them from homocentrism.
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