Q. It is an increasing trend of businesses to neglect the environment to further their profits.
What problems can this cause? What measures could resolve them?
One of the biggest problems facing the world today is that it is an increasing trend of businesses to ignore the environment to further their profits. In this essay, I will represent the reason about the above problem and suggest some reasonable ways.
First of all, nowadays, a lot of companies have developed for only their purpose of income, while by neglecting the environment. This is because they think that their profit benefit is more significant and they did not directly experience environmental issues such as a sea-level increase or air pollution. However, fine and yellow dust become more and more serious nowadays, which has a negative impact on people's health. It means that the businesses should perceive these severe situations for not only themselves but also the next generation as well as our earth (여기는 밑에서 설명을 넣어드리겠습니다.).
There are several methods to deal with the mentioned problem. Firstly, the strict power of government is needed. It means that the government should impose a tax and meticulously limit the regulation to the companies which affect the environment in a negative way. Secondly, the government should invest to natural resources energy like tidal or solar energy. By doing so, the environmental crisis will be remain and better than now.
To sum up, despite of the fact that a number of organizations do not mind about the environment for their aims because they did not suffer the environmental problems. However, it can be solved by imposing the tax, regulating the law to the certain companies and investing the natural energy.
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오늘은 'Earth' 의 대소문자 관해서 다뤄볼 겁니다.
Earth 는 고유명사가 될 수도, 보통명사가 될 수도 있습니다. 이때, 경우에 따라 전자는 대문자 시작, 후자는 소문자 시작해주셔야하고요.
Earth 가 태양계의 세 번째 행성인 '지구' 를 의미할 때에는 대문자 시작해주시면 됩니다. 가령, Looking at our planet Earth from outer space was an unforgettable experience. 라는 문장에서는 지구라는 의미로 작성되었으므로 대문자로 시작하는 것이죠.
반면 대지, 땅에 대해서 얘기할 때에는 소문자 시작입니다. 예를 들어, By digging the earth for about an hour, we were finally able to find the treasure. 라는 문장에서는 땅이라는 의미로 쓰였기 때문에 소문자 시작인 것이죠.
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