Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief that it is good to
have friends who always have the same opinions. However, there is a more
persuasive argument that it is better to choose friends who have various
perspectives.
On the other hand, some people tend to
looking for those who are like-minded. Specifically, when students start a conversation
with friends who have the same opinions, it is easy to build a sense of belonging
and teamwork team works. Interacting with these kinds of friends such as always accord with their opinions
is caused can cause a good learning atmosphere. For example, research has shown that
students whose studied in a group with friends who have the same idea get
better grades than those who do their work with someone who have various
opinions. (사실 여기의 경우, 제가 7점 정도 목표하는 학생들에게는 절대로 이렇게 쓰지 말라고 말씀드립니다. 그러나 4점 정도만 필요하시기 때문에 오히려 이렇게 쓰시는 것도 권장드려요.) However it can be disturb students to think in different ways of thinking.
They would not be able to can’t be widen their knowledges.
Nevertheless, it is good to have friends
who have diverse opinions. These kind of friends can help learn how to bring up problems and solve them together It can be learn how go bring up problems and solve
them with friends. It is important to how to deal with problems in their lives.
Also they can get emotional growth or personal development. That is a process
to grow into adulthood. In fact, a
recent survey for students, some students can feel more familiar with their
friends after argument. (단순 친구가 아니라, 자기와 다른 친구~라고 적어주셔야 합니다.) They can learn community skills with other people.
Beside they thought they are more be mature after solving the problems solved problems.
To sum up, while it is apparent that
meeting friends who have the same opinions is good to students, it is undeniable
that interacting interective with friends who have different opinions is more important.
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