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Through the innovation of technology, An increasing number of people are using technology equipment such as mobile phones and computers, while some people also worried about losing communicate skills because of it. I completely agree with this perspective. First of all, People rely on too much their phone. They are addicted to social media such as Facebook, Instagram, Snapchat, and these can easily reach whenever they want. Since even when they meet and talk with others but still keep their eyes on the phones, this cause lack of face to face conversation between people. For example, At the dinner time, Family members coming together in order to talk their day, but everyone keep look at their phone until dinner over. Secondly, Contacting with technology equipment is easy to make friends and talk with them. When people talk with anonymous on online, they become confident and talk freely compared to meeting in person, because of no eye-to-eye contact, and It cause gradually loss of communication ability. For instance, When those who met on the internet finally met, they tend to feel awkward and they want to avoid the situation as soon as possible. And this shows an aspect of the lack of conversational skills. In conclusion, People who depend on phones and computers talk less with each other and they may feel afraid when they talk in person, Since they are addicted to social media and meet someone via the internet instead of meeting in real life. -글자수 275 -목표점수 6.5 -다음 시험일자 : 4월중, 10월까지 점수를 만들어야 석사 지원가능합니다. -소요 시간 : 35분 처음으로 라이팅 작성해봤습니다. 첨삭부탁드립니다. 감사합니다. |