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Some people think that these days, we can
get various information through social networking sites. However, I firmly
believe that when it comes to young children, they can easily watch violent videos,
and there are a lot of fake news about celebrities. Thus social networking sites have a huge negative impact on individuals and society.
To begin with, young people can easily
watch violent videos through social networking sites because it is easy to
access whenever they want. By doing so, they will be able to share this video
with peers and follow these violent actions acting. The reason why this will harmfully affect their
lives is (The reason why~~ is because는 그냥 세트로 외우세요!) because they can use to watch violent videos. After that, they can not
recognize that is wrong. Besides, people’s eyesight has decreased in modern
society not only young people but also adults because of social networking
sites. Therefore, young children can easily access violent videos whenever they
want, and this will have negative effects on their future lives. (이걸 빼든지, 그 위의 시력 문장을 빼든지, 둘 중 취향껏 해주시면 됩니다. 혹은 둘 다 빼지 않고 이 문장 내에 시력 관련해서 요약해주셔도 되고요.)
Moreover, many celebrities get a lot of
stress from wrong information about their things because people believe after
reading articles, it does not matter whether true or wrong. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) Also, social
networking sites provide unnecessary information to the public. For example, in Korea, many
people make comments anonymously to celebrities without specific reasons, and
they make a judgment between right and wrong. As a result, many celebrities are
suffering from this situation, and also they will be able to struggle with
severe depression. Because Therefore, social networking sites have a system of anonymity anonymous, so many people make bad comments to celebrities. They will be able
to suffer all the time.
To sum up, by using social networking sites, young
children can easily watch violent videos, and we can read some articles about
celebrities’ personal information. I believe that social networking sites have
a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
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