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Most people believe that art is regarded as both important part of a society and an expression of its culture. In my opinion, it is important for children to learn art, but it is not essential. To the begin with, I believe that people who are young could provoke to develop creativity and imagination by learning art. In other words, during while experiencing art, such as music and drawing, children could widen their perspectives. Also, this can lead to advanced social development. For example, about 10 years ago, most people believed surfing the Internet through a cellphone an internet in cellphone was definitely impossible. They regarded that it was is possible in only imagine. However, scientist made world that can be possible because of imagination. Therefore, creativity and imagination can ensure that these will make society developed. (예시를 들으실 때에는 미술과 창의성이 모두 반영되어야 합니다. 지금은 후자만 있기 때문에 적절하지 않고요.) However, in my opinion, all children do not need to learn art. In other words, if children do not like to learn art, they would learn other subjects, like math, science and language. Each children might have their own interests, so it would be much worth that they develop what they love. For instance, when my brother was 7 years old, he hated to learn playing the piano but he loved to study science, especially chemistry. Eventually, he quit piano lessons and studied more about chemistry. Therefore, he is majoring majored in chemistry now. I believe that it is more important for children to focus on what children are interested in. In conclusion, learning art is considerably important for children in order to develop creativity and imagination. However, if children do not have interest in art, it is better that they would focus on other subjects that they like rather than art.
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