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Young people tend to play do computer games and search the Internet through a computer for a long period. Therefore, children’s health and mental development may be hindered by spending too much time with computers. I totally agree that those problems have a bad influence on children. Spending too much time with using computer, children do not control by themselves to do computer games and it causes to make a bad habit for their health. Children find it hard to control themselves from spending too much time using a computer, and this brings a bad effect on their health. So, children who use computers for a long time are at a higher risk of developing computer vision syndrome. Also they are going to lose their eyesight and eventually wear glasses for the rest of their life. Moreover, when sitting in front of a computer, they can gain be gained weight and do not spend time to exercise outside or go to outdoor activities. It is likely to be a high health problem like obesity obese or heart disease because of lack of exercise. Specifically, focusing on something through the Internet does not help our young people to became more communicative and creative. First of all, if they have enough time with their friends, their communication skills and interactive thinking are going to decrease less and children cannot be hanging out with people. (여기서 엔터는 따로 치지 않습니다.) Also, adolescent needs to be inspired by several activities at school. For example, they can improve their artistic skills or numerical thinking when attending the class and being educated by an instructor. However, if they were addicted to computer games or websites which show violent and sexual images to attract more internet users, they would not concentrate on things they are obliged to do at their school. For the reasons mentioned above, I totally agree that we should take time limits for children to do with computer. (이거에 동의해서는 안 되고, 컴퓨터 사용이 부정적인 영향을 준다는 점에 대해 동의하셔야 합니다.) |