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문제: Some people believe that it is best to stick to one career for your whole life. Others think that it is better to try different professions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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* Recently, the issue of job experience has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that the best way to succeed in career is to work for one company for an entire life, while others argue otherwise. And I am wholeheartedly in agreement with the former stand, In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, those who claim that people should experience a variety of jobs for their career do so for several reasons. Proponents of this argument insist that workers could improve their business skills by working on many fields. To provide a hypothetical example, if employees address various kinds of complex problems, which have something to do with business on their own, they would be able to acquire precious skills including negotiation and communication skill. Another argument is that the more jobs they work for, the higher valuable they will become. This is because most operations prefer people who have ability to handle a number of tasks. Given these points, some people hold the view that workers ought to work on a variety of job fields.
My opinion, however, is that working on only one field has a better impact on workers' careers. Perhaps the principal advantage is that people could become experts for their professions, which can lead to financial benefits. To exemplify, recent research conducted by The Catholic University of Korea has revealed that employees who have worked for one company for a long time have a tendency to be given much higher salaries. Another benefit is that workers could be appreciated by their colleagues as experts for their careers. This means that working for solely one company for whole life results in excellent reputation that meets person's desire. In light of the above, I find these more persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering in a careful manner, I fully support the view that it is better to have one job for whole life for the reasons discussed above.