Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is controversial issue regarding advertisement among people who believe that advertising something is helpful for us to purchase things and who argue that the advertising doesn’t work nowadays. In my opinion, the advertisement is still effective way to persuade someone.
On the one hand, some people strongly think that the advertisement doesn’t let our purchase products. Because, there are lots of ad in society and they are very common to people. So, they don’t pay attention to advertisement. Thus the advertisement doesn’t play a role in making that the people buy something.
On the other hand, although there are a number of advertisement, it is needed to both of company and customer. Because the customers would like to know information which they interested in, and the company releases their products pros. Therefore, it is helped to both of them. Also, method of advertising something has developed until now. There are many kind of ads these days. So, they are boring not at all. Therefore, the advertisement is essential to some people who have something to buy and it is successful way to inform the products.
Consequently, I personally believe that it is critical to advertising a product. Even though many company always advertise their products, the recently advertisement develops, and it is clearly different compared to old thing such as technology, story. Thus, I argue that the advertisement is good at making the people purchase something.
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