With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information much faster. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Attributable to modern technology, it It is considered that students are able to acquire knowledge much faster these days, compared to the past attributable to modern technology. While some people steadfastly disagree with this statement, I strongly believe that the technology would allow students to learn a great deal of information in a short period of time.
To begin with, the assistance of technology is of help to students in terms of comprehension. It is axiomatic that advanced technology, such as the (인터넷이 단독으로 쓰일 때에는 그냥 the를 기계적으로 붙여주시면 됩니다.) Internet, have bestowed a variety of functions, including videos that have visual and sound effects. A 3-dimension technique and proper sound effects would have a great impact on students' learning as it could explain the subject in more detail and in depth. For instance, learning a cell division, like mitosis, can be extremely hard for students to get the hang of it if they just read books or articles because it does not show the movement of our cells. On the other hand, videos on the Youtube YouTube or Google would help them to learn effectively and quickly by showing the actual changes of each phase.
Moreover, students could search for the relevant information quickly by making use of technology these days. It is an undeniable fact that looking for the exact knowledge in the library made students spend a huge amount of time finding the one in the past. However, people today could simply type a single word to find the right subject through utilsing an electronic dictionary, which, as a result, preventing them to squander their time away. Consequently, this would make students study more efficiently and productively because of its shortened period of time.
In conclusion, when all specific reasons and relavant examples are considered and evaluated, I agree with the statement that on account of technology, students could understand and learn knowledge much faster nowadays, unlike those in the past.
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